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		<title>By: writerdad</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/children-write-the-future/children-write-the-future/comment-page-1/#comment-27085</link>
		<dc:creator>writerdad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Feb 2010 23:03:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Exactly! &lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;And I think that approach has worked really well with you know who. I&#039;ve never seen her more eager to return to her work, actually excited to improve it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Exactly! </p>
<p>And I think that approach has worked really well with you know who. I&#39;ve never seen her more eager to return to her work, actually excited to improve it.</p>
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		<title>By: cindyplatt</title>
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		<dc:creator>cindyplatt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Feb 2010 22:42:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Asking children to edit their work is like telling them they are on eternal restriction.  It is not easy to look at your work because you might not like what you see, but if we are taught that it is fun to look back and know you can fix it, change it or make it better then we are treating it like art.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Asking children to edit their work is like telling them they are on eternal restriction.  It is not easy to look at your work because you might not like what you see, but if we are taught that it is fun to look back and know you can fix it, change it or make it better then we are treating it like art.</p>
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		<title>By: Content Marketing &#124; Ghostwriter Dad</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/children-write-the-future/children-write-the-future/comment-page-1/#comment-26556</link>
		<dc:creator>Content Marketing &#124; Ghostwriter Dad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Jan 2010 08:06:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] feature. This is a core belief of mine, and I’ve been considering bringing my daughter from Children Write the Future to my home site for a while. She&#8217;s worked hard and earned it. So I wanted to give her a wider [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] feature. This is a core belief of mine, and I’ve been considering bringing my daughter from Children Write the Future to my home site for a while. She&#8217;s worked hard and earned it. So I wanted to give her a wider [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Dave</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 17:39:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Works well in terms of getting sheer volume down on the page. How much of that volume is useable is debatable. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Works well in terms of getting sheer volume down on the page. How much of that volume is useable is debatable. :)</p>
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		<title>By: Dave</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 17:39:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Works well in terms of getting sheer volume down on the page. How much of that volume is useable is debatable. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Works well in terms of getting sheer volume down on the page. How much of that volume is useable is debatable. :)</p>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/children-write-the-future/children-write-the-future/comment-page-1/#comment-26276</link>
		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 16:03:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Ari,

Yeah, it&#039;s that old clarity over cleverness thing. I have great difficulty with that myself, though I&#039;ve come a loooong way in the last year. Writing sales copy has helped a lot. It&#039;s at constant odds with my fiction, where the way I turn a phrase seems to be more important as anything else. With sales copy, though, it&#039;s all about what drives behavior. For that, you HAVE to be crystal clear. As you said, if a child can&#039;t explain it, then you haven&#039;t done your job.
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/collectiveinkwell/~3/LAiyL2GdmxU/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;10 Words to Kickstart Your Creative Engine&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Ari,</p>
<p>Yeah, it&#8217;s that old clarity over cleverness thing. I have great difficulty with that myself, though I&#8217;ve come a loooong way in the last year. Writing sales copy has helped a lot. It&#8217;s at constant odds with my fiction, where the way I turn a phrase seems to be more important as anything else. With sales copy, though, it&#8217;s all about what drives behavior. For that, you HAVE to be crystal clear. As you said, if a child can&#8217;t explain it, then you haven&#8217;t done your job.<br />
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/collectiveinkwell/~3/LAiyL2GdmxU/" rel="nofollow">10 Words to Kickstart Your Creative Engine</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/children-write-the-future/children-write-the-future/comment-page-1/#comment-39812</link>
		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 16:03:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Ari,

Yeah, it&#039;s that old clarity over cleverness thing. I have great difficulty with that myself, though I&#039;ve come a loooong way in the last year. Writing sales copy has helped a lot. It&#039;s at constant odds with my fiction, where the way I turn a phrase seems to be more important as anything else. With sales copy, though, it&#039;s all about what drives behavior. For that, you HAVE to be crystal clear. As you said, if a child can&#039;t explain it, then you haven&#039;t done your job.
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/collectiveinkwell/~3/LAiyL2GdmxU/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;10 Words to Kickstart Your Creative Engine&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Ari,</p>
<p>Yeah, it&#8217;s that old clarity over cleverness thing. I have great difficulty with that myself, though I&#8217;ve come a loooong way in the last year. Writing sales copy has helped a lot. It&#8217;s at constant odds with my fiction, where the way I turn a phrase seems to be more important as anything else. With sales copy, though, it&#8217;s all about what drives behavior. For that, you HAVE to be crystal clear. As you said, if a child can&#8217;t explain it, then you haven&#8217;t done your job.<br />
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/collectiveinkwell/~3/LAiyL2GdmxU/" rel="nofollow">10 Words to Kickstart Your Creative Engine</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 16:01:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oops. That was supposed to be me, but my daughter was still logged in. : )
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/collectiveinkwell/~3/LAiyL2GdmxU/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;10 Words to Kickstart Your Creative Engine&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oops. That was supposed to be me, but my daughter was still logged in. : )<br />
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/collectiveinkwell/~3/LAiyL2GdmxU/" rel="nofollow">10 Words to Kickstart Your Creative Engine</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 16:01:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oops. That was supposed to be me, but my daughter was still logged in. : )
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/collectiveinkwell/~3/LAiyL2GdmxU/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;10 Words to Kickstart Your Creative Engine&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oops. That was supposed to be me, but my daughter was still logged in. : )<br />
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/collectiveinkwell/~3/LAiyL2GdmxU/" rel="nofollow">10 Words to Kickstart Your Creative Engine</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 16:00:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Haha, me too my man. Me too. How is voice recognition working for you? Does it help?
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://childrenwritethefuture.com/why-doesnt-my-child-like-to-write/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;This is Why Your Child Doesn’t Like to Write&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Haha, me too my man. Me too. How is voice recognition working for you? Does it help?<br />
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://childrenwritethefuture.com/why-doesnt-my-child-like-to-write/" rel="nofollow">This is Why Your Child Doesn’t Like to Write</a> =-.</p>
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