Sure Mom, You Can Have a Guest Post.

October 22, 2008

“When you teach your son, you teach your son’s son.”

~The Talmud

My grandfather happened to pass, the day I told my family I’d started writing.  Every Saturday for the last few months of his life, I sat next to him in bed and read him my rhymes.  At his funeral, I read a rhyme I wrote for him.

The following Wednesday, my mom came to dinner with a page of prose to match the piece she’d heard.  Her tip of the bonnet to me.

When I told her I was planning a post on the power of praise, she asked if she could publish the poem she’d penned.

“Um… sure,” I said, preceding a twitter of nervous laughter.

One day, I’m certain, my mom will join us in Blogopolis.  This will be good for her, and save me from random phone calls explaining the events of Xena, Warrior Princess, Angel, and Nip Tuck. Actually, now that I think about it, twitter would be right up my mom’s alley.

Without further ado, here’s Grammy:

When Sean was just a little guy,
he was the apple of my eye.
My first, my baby, my pride, my joy.
But oh my God, was he all boy!
He certainly put me through my paces,
with mischievous acts and silly faces.
Then along came a sister, we saw as a thrill;
he was a rascally Jack to her sweet little Jill.
A brand new playmate, the perfect target,
for pranks that would daily challenge Margaret.
When teachers called me to complain
about behavior quite insane,
I took it all with a granule of salt,
never wanting to launch parental assault.
Life is not black and life is not white.
It’s many shades of grey in my sight.
Kids will be bad, and kids will be good,
but kids should also be understood.
Sean was fun, a total charmer,
but true in heart, a never harmer.
I knew that in spite of his wit and his spunk,
immature actions and juvenile junk,
I saw the spirit of someone great
who could be a father and perfect mate.
Take some maturity, add on the years,
all life’s experience and some of its tears.
Sprinkle some patience, then you will see,
the outstanding man he was destined to be.
As I have grown in age and in girth,
I have never regretted once giving birth
to a rascally, bright, and challenging child.
Sometimes tender, occasionally wild.
He’s grown to be more than I could expect;
honest, straightforward, mature, and direct.
Still ten years old when we are alone,
but wise beyond years when needed at home.
His grandma and grandpa look down in pride
at the man he’s become, past history aside.
He certainly gave them a run for their money,
but now walks the path of his Papí and Honey.

Writer Dad

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  • Kittytown - your reputation is firmly cemented in my eyes. Good to see you again.

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  • I love how you include your whole family in your blog - not just as subject matter but as actual participants.

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  • Writer Dad
    Chris: Thanks for saying that. She's going to be all gloaty at dinner tomorrow.

    Rita: I'm with you. There's not enough bravado in blogging, at least not when it comes to the language. I'd take alliteration over another top ten list any day.

    Mom: You are quite welcome. We can do it again if you are less annoying next time. Seriously mom, not everything that falls from your mouth is a golden nugget. It is a beautiful, touching poem, and it nails me pretty well. Honey and Papí both would have loved it.

    Luci: I wanted to lay down a beat, but she wouldn't let me. Just between you and me (and a few hundred others) her sanity's not too terribly intact.

    KittyTown: I would make my alliteration joke, but since I spoke to you like two hours ago, it would only be redundant. Of course, no one else would know I was repeating myself, but you would. Truly, that's ten time too terrible to even try.

    Marelisa: She is ALMOST as proud of me as she is of herself. Don't worry, Mare. She's laughing too.

    Kimmelin: There is a direct correlation to the quantity of his amazing to the gray in your hair. Here's to a whole head of white.

    Apathy Lounge: Thanks. My mom is grinning ear to ear.

    Vered: Every teacher I've ever had.
  • You? Mischievous?? Who would have guessed.

    :-)

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  • Sweet and very suitable tribute.

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  • I LOVE this! Go, Grammy!

    I have to confess...I hear so much of our middle son in reading this poem. He is sweet, mischievous, silly, daring, an adrenaline junkie, earnest, loving...and he's only four. I can't wait to see the older boy, the teenager, and the man he will become. I know he will be amazing (even if I sprout a head full of grey hairs while accompanying him on that journey).

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  • This is great Sean, your mother is talented and obviously very proud of you. I can see you as a little kid :-)

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  • kittytown
    Too much alliteration is cutesy and gimmicky and reminds me of Sesame Street.


    (sorry, I just had to duck my head in and say something rascally to keep up my reputation in Blogger Dad's eyes)
  • Wow, who knew mom could rhyme so well?! Can we set that to some sort of rap beat? lol. Anyway, as a mom of a little rascal boy myself, it is refreshing that she survived with her sanity intact. And loved every minute of it!
    Nice work.

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  • Writer Dad's Mom
    Hi Sean, thank you for indulging me and publishing my post. You know that I love and appreciate you even though we sometimes drive each other nuts! As for the fact that you are eternally ten years old around me , as maddening as that is sometimes, it is one of the things I enjoy the most about our relationship. I can hardly wait to hear you fart "YANKEE DOODLE'" (or is it yankee doo-doo)? when you're 64. Luv ya, mom.
  • Writer Dad,
    As an "alliteration" admirer, I must tell you that the standard verse used for alliteration is RL Stephenson's
    "home is the sailor home from the sea
    and the hunter home from the hills."
    It is said that alliterative words have 30% more impact on a reader...but "overusage" can be, well...read the above 2 sentences again...
    Personally, I never tire of alliteration - that's just me. I think it's nice to see literary devices used in blogs - and in ALL writing.
    :-)
    Rita

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  • I would give up all the gifts that I've received from my mom from the past and the future if only I could get a poem like this one.

    You are blessed my good friend!

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  • Writer Dad
    Ian: It's so true. My mom walks in the room, and I'll start burping the alphabet. No way would I do that around my own kids. The button is just a little WD button that links back to Writer Dad. It's either a 175 or a 125. Eric Hamm from Motivate Thyself presented them to me because he is awesome.

    Dot: Sorry about the alliteration Dot. It's my current literary tick. I'm sure I'll bore of it soon enough. Then I'll move on to something (hopefully) less annoying. We'll cook up something soon for Max.

    Friar: I was thinking the same thing on your Mom's last one. Mine had already gotten me to agree. We need a funny name. Let's put our thinking caps on.

    Barbara: It's only a matter of time. Soon enough we'll have Grammy, NBOTW.

    Hayden: It's very awesome, and awesome for you to say it. Thanks, Hayden.
  • Go, Writer Mom!

    I see, Sean, that you are inspiring the people around you as you inspire those of us online. How awesome is that.

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  • Hi Writer Dad and Mom-

    What a great poem. I'm with Friar. Mom has the makings for a great blogger.

    The writing talent is in the genes. Way to go!

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  • @Writer Dad

    Maybe your Mom and my Mom should get together, and start their own blog!
    :-D
  • Dot
    A rascal, eh? I could have guessed. Nice to hear from you, Grammy! ( I think it's Max's turn now.)

    And Sean, re your third paragraph, p-p-p-p-p-p-please alliterate a little a-less? :-)

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  • Ian
    That was awesome. Nice work, grammy.

    I agree with Miguel. The line that caught me was:
    "Still ten years old when we are alone,
    but wise beyond years when needed at home."

    That's how my mother and I work.

    Also, WD, what is this button you speak of?

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  • Writer Dad
    Miguel: It's in the mail (well, it will be by this afternoon). Thanks, Miguel.

    Blogger Dad: That's what I'm saying.

    Wendi: Aw, shucks, Wendi. Thanks. Writer Dad's Mom is awesome, so long as you don't try to tweak her verbiage.

    Lance: Thanks, Lance. Grammy definitely has the gift of gab,

    Sal: My mom reads every post, even without a computer. She used to call me so I could read them out loud to her, but now she has a computer class. It's pretty awesome. You should tell your mom, then tell us what she says.

    Kip: That's a good quote, so long as reasons don't have to more than a single sentence.

    Kool Aid: Us handfuls grow up right nice sometimes. We just can't be allowed to get away with too much. I'm sure you've got something great in your handful.

    GreenJello: Thanks, GJ. She'll be tickled when she reads that later today.

    Steph: Mom mom is exceedingly talented. There is no doubt about that.

    Kyddryn: Thank. You. Kindly!

    Susan: It's a total awww shucks.

    Rita: I do. I promise.
  • Writer Dad's Mom,
    This is increbibly beautiful - a wonderful tribute to your son. How lucky he is to have a mother who understands her boy, and takes such pride in the man he grew to become. Thank you for sharing this with us.

    Writer Dad,
    You, too, are fortunate. Cherish your mother.
    Rita

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  • Awwwww! What a wonderful verbal hug from Mom. And it even rhymes!

    Susan
  • That. Was. Awesome!

    Shade and Sweetwater,
    K

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  • Funny, this—I was just thinking of my mom's poems from long ago. They were very good, too. I love being an adult and recognizing in my parents desires and passions, like writing and a love of words, similar to my own. It's really quite amazing, when I think of it. Wow. Parents are people, too! AND they can even be talented!

    :)

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  • Love it! I can see where you inherited your writing ability from. :)

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  • That's wonderful! And gives hope to a mom who's getting the dreaded parent/teacher conference from preschool at age 2 1/2 that he's "quite the handful."

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  • As an aside to the benefits of praise, a very wise educator, Grace Rotzel (http://www.theschoolinrosevalley.org/facilities...) advised, "...always say 'yes' to children, unless you actually have a reason to say 'no'."

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  • Sal
    That was awesome. I'm glad you finally gave credit to where credit is due, WD. I can see where you learned it all from.

    "In an upcoming post Writer Dad’s gonna rap about the grueling difficulties of a good edit.. and how they’re exponentially worse when doing them with your mother."

    Now I know why I haven't let my mom know about my blog yet ;)

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  • Awesome words penned together "Grammy"! Your writing, it is art in word format. What a wonderful gift you have, just as Sean does - the gift of writing beautifully...

    Sean, I think you can shelve that nervous laughter...your Mom's a hit!

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  • Beginning to think this site should have a tag line of *All in the Family...*

    What a talented bunch! Nice job Writer Mom! Now we know where he gets it! We love your son.

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  • Great and sweet poem, Writer Mom! Trust me when I say, your son is one of the kindest, coolest people I've met in a long time. That sister of his, though, phew, she's the rascally one! :)

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  • Still ten years old when we are alone,
    but wise beyond years when needed at home.

    These are words of praise to live by. Congrats, WD :)

    (send me your button, k?)

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  • “Um… sure,” I said, preceding a twitter of nervous laughter."

    Lulz.
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