• Thanks Susan!

    Yeah, I really love writing in rhyme, and would LOVE to do an entire book someday. I think it's a great way to teach because it's instantly engaging. One of these days I'll make it happen!

    I think this is my favorite line, just because of the playful little twist.

    "College, car, a wedding day; plus, Mom and Dad could bet,
    Promise would need at least ten things, not invented yet."
  • You continue to dazzle me with your talent. Wrapping important lessons into poetry is an impressive feat. Well done.

    I especially liked the two lines below. Athough the parents worked hard to save, their 30 years of sacrifice were happy ones. It's a nice reminder that you can have a good life without living beyond your means.
    "Mom and Dad were ready to tell and fully confident,
    That thirty years of saving had been three decades nicely spent."
  • Hi Writer Dad! Loved this poem the first time I read it and love it again today.

    Perfection.
  • Hi Emily! Awesome to see you. Yeah, this is one of my favorite things I think I've ever written. I hope someday it goes somewhere other than a quick to fade blog post, as I do believe it's a message that could do a great deal for families willing to listen.

    Thanks for dropping in. : > )
    .-= Sean´s last blog ..How to Find the Ghostwriter that’s Right For You =-.
  • This is a terrific poem! And follows my own beliefs in how to raise kids and prepare for the future. :)
    .-= moonduster (Becky)´s last blog ..NaNoWriMo Status Update - Week 1 =-.
  • Thanks Becky! I appreciate the compliment. Yeah, I couldn't agree more. The message in this poem is something all new parents could benefit from, and something most new parents don't ever take the time to consider.
    .-= Sean´s last blog ..How to Find the Ghostwriter that’s Right For You =-.
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