• margaret hiland
    I love this,and it was just what i was looking for to put with an hour glass for my neice's birthday. Her mother, my sister, passed away a year and a half ago and she will be 33 on the 24 th of March.The poem really says it all and sounds just like her life...stressed and no time for the important things in life. We are all going to Disneyworld together and I am going to treasure every minute of that time.
  • writerdad
    Thanks so much!

    Margaret is my mom's name, and this was kinda sorta written about her. :)

    Have an awesome day.
  • writerdad
    Thanks so much!

    Margaret is my mom's name, and this was kinda sorta written about her. :)

    Have an awesome day.
  • That sounds fantabulous! I'll be first in line.
  • Randi: You'll see something in ink by the end of the year. How does that sound?

    Trina: I liked the image of his long and skinny yet strong arms. Makes me kinda giggly.

    Bud: I'll read after the finale. : > )

    Laurie: Well said. These days I feel so young, skating along the edge of ain't gonna be that way forever.

    J.D: I've never valued the old man more than I do today, and I won't until tomorrow.

    Mom: Do I need to answer that? You know I love you before I say this, but Father Time needs to give you the beating of a lifetime. : > )
  • writerdad's mom
    awww, sean, was I your muse? yes, being the consumate procrastinator has definitely put a crimp in my life and severely caught up with me! There never seems to be enough time for everything and sometmes it's easier, unfortunately to let stuff slide even longer because you get on overwhelm mode, so mindless tv for a few hours is medication. Where does the time go? I think of a time when I could juggle motherhood, a job, the gym and entertainment and it all fit. How did I do it? I think of a little humorous sign from my childhood that had a little dog chasing its tail with the caption "the hurrieder I go, the behinder I get". luv ya, mom.
  • One of the biggest shifts for me was making time a first class citizen.

    Once you really value time, you really do make the most of it. As a friend of mine puts it, "time is really all you've got."
  • Laurie
    My mom once told me the older you get the faster time moves. I don't know how this is true but it really is. last week I started my son in kindergarten. This month he turns 20. I don't know how that happened.

    My hub wrote a song and it talked about getting older and retiring. One of the lines said, "Got all the time in the world and no time at all." I thought that was really profound. It reminds me to not say, I'll do that when.... How about I'll do that now!

    Great poem Sean.
  • Sean,

    Maybe instead of watching Lost you could read :)
  • Trina
    Loved the visual of Father Time. Terrific timing as June draws near....
  • I was thinking that we need to change the slam "vocabulary too rich for children" into the compliment that it really is: "Rich vocabulary for children too."
  • Paisley: Nothing would please me more than for the gatekeepers to grant me entrance into the world of children's publishing. Well maybe a few things, but not many.

    Vered: Me too, sister. Me too.

    Lisis: Maybe the finest compliment I've had all week. Thanks! I'm off to tweet it.
  • I love this little pearl of wisdom: "I’ll start to notice the small things in my days,
    By doing new things and changing my ways.”

    The poem is exquisite... a little Dr. Seuss and a lot of Rudyard Kipling. LOVE it!!
  • Beautiful!

    "Life rolled from her grip" - that's my biggest fear.
  • I see the seriousness but I also see your great sense of humour coming through. It's one of those poems to be enjoyed by both adults and kids. Parents would have a wonderful time reading this to their kids. The kangaroo image is funny!
  • Emily: Thanks! : > )

    Bud: Thanks, Bud. I would say a couple of hours, but scattered over a long period of time. One line here, one line there. This particular piece had more restructuring than almost anything else I've written. The original was more about June than it was about Father Time, but then I thought TIME needed to give her some whup ass. Unfortunately, I was looking for the original so I could split the piece in two, but then I couldn't find it. I started writing this before I started writing actually. Even though it posted yesterday, it's the oldest thing on the site.

    Jake: I feel you. The only thing that got me off my daily TV binge was canceling cable. I wish I read more though. Since I started writing, I've pretty much stopped reading.

    Stephen: My pleasure Stephen. Thanks for telling me your favorite parts. It's been a lot of fun to read what everyone's favorites are. "June looked at time. She stared that clock in his face, Then said, “You’re right! I’ve been living all over the place. I have to slow down. I understand that I do. I can’t keep bounding about like a big kangaroo." That's my favorite, not because it's the best, but because I remember the specific AHA! moment when I thought it up at a red light on the way to pick up my daughter from school.

    Tricia: Thanks Tricia. I love being able to whittle whimsy while also having something significant to say. Not always the easiest thing to do, but always worth it.
  • Beautiful, poignant and a message I've also recently been working to better digest.
  • WOW! This is over the top fantastic. So many of the things we say about time like 'time management" or "save time" are simply not true. We don't manage it or save it or anything else. It marches on no matter what we do.

    It was all great, but these have the most impact on me:

    "Every minute you use is one less than before,
    And I am never permitted to offer you more."

    "I hand it out once and then never again."

    "Live a life that’s momentous. You hold ME in your hand.
    Treasure each moment like the last grain of sand.”

    Thank you!
  • I'm doing OK with the exercise aspect, but with books instead of TV ... uh, yeah. TIME is winning on that front.
  • I am overwhelmed with emotion every time I read your work. Your writing is simply phenomenal.

    Favorite lines:

    You must understand that before it’s too late.
    We all live the life we decide to create.”
    “So, do the important, ignore the small.
    There is not enough time to get to it all.

    Out of curiosity how long did it take you to write this?
  • Fantastic!
  • Marilyn: Thank you, Marilyn. I'm thrilled to have you. : > )

    Avital: We all get the same minutes:

    Randi: It is so so so true. There's a fantastic quote that I'm having trouble remembering, I think it's by Twain, where he says something similar. No one is blessed with extra hours. If we whittle our minutes with television or a video games or whatever else might tickle our fancy, that's fine - but we can't lament not getting enough done in our days. Minutes are distributed with equality.

    Lori: That was its purpose when written. I hope it comes alive as well. It's actually over a year old and in the same batch of stories that had "vocabulary too rich for children."
  • "All TIME is a mixture of how and when." -- Great poem, story, and advice. You do know how to roll it all together. I saw it in my mind as a illustrated kids' book and hope someday it comes alive for you that way.
  • This is another good one, Sean.

    I have always been interested in time management and productivity. Once, when I was in an "I need to be financially successful" phase of my life, I sat in my car in front of the homes of some extremely wealthy people. I asked myself, "What is it that they have, that I don't?" As I sat listening for the answer I heard very softly, "Nothing. You have exactly the same amount of time in a day as they do." Yes, time is the great equalizer.

    Luckily, I got older and realized that making tons of money with my 24 hours each day was not all that important anymore. Being a mother who was "in the present" for my children meant more to me. This was my favorite line "I hand it out once and then never again." Children are not too impressed with "later" or "maybe on the weekend."
  • Beautiful poem. Time can be both a friend and a foe - I guess it all depends on our foreign policy, or in other words: it depends on what we do with it...
  • That's something I should really do more of, using my time properly instead of letting it all slip away from me.

    You really are a wonderful writer Sean, I love reading your blog. :)
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