May

four seasonsFour Seasons is such a wonderfully quiet project, here but once a month slowly building to something extremely special at the end of this year. If you have already subscribed to the free stories once per month, thank you. If not, you can to it at the end of this excerpt.

David Wright has now joined the project and made it even awesomer.

Enjoy:

“I’m not eating her egg rolls, and I don’t care if they’ve gone from honorable to third place at the Strawberry Festival – they’re still filthy,” Brian barely muttered the last fragment under his breath as he waved the red Grand Am in front of him. “And they’re barely even egg rolls.”

“You don’t have to eat the egg rolls. I already told her you’re lactose intolerant.”  Maya put her hand on Brian’s knee as he relaxed into the rhythm of the newly merged freeway, and then added, “Just be nice.”

“I’m always nice,” he said.

“I know,” Maya agreed exactly as much out loud as she did in her head, “but today you have to be Mother’s Day nice.”

“Mother’s Day nice? She hasn’t so mush as wished me a happy birthday in the six years we’ve been together.”

“She doesn’t mean anything by it.”

Brian could have said, “Of course you feel that way. She’s your mother,” but he didn’t see it filling the air any differently than the approximately 4,738 times he’d already said it before. Maya was well aware of every one of her mother’s million and one faults, and could probably write them backwards in Greek if she were ever to slip into some sort of talking-in-tongues dementia. But it was her mother, and Maya’s responses were well oiled; immediate instinct being to dim the indisputable defects of her mom while shining a light on Brian’s own melodrama.

Brian stared at the road, trying to read the license plate three cars in front of him while Maya fiddled with the stations. Jasmine cried from the back seat, suddenly awake and sure to be hungry. She’d managed to stay asleep from cradle to car seat, as well as the last two hours nestled in the freeway’s lullaby.

The sudden cry split the moment and Maya started digging through the diaper bag in search of a bottle. Brian tried not to sigh. Maya’s mother, Olivia, was a royal pain in the ass and though already plenty tolerant of her bullshit, he’d be a lot more able to swallow it all with a smile if she could at the very least admit it.

Olivia’s husband left her 10 years earlier and she’d been drowning deeper in delusion with each passing year. At first, Olivia believed (despite the absurdity), that she and the old man were meant for one another. Once she realized he was a dirty scum bag who thought cheating was fine as long as you’re breathing, she started to believe it was she and Maya vs. the world and any man walking it.

Brian was sure Maya defended him whenever one of the arrows was especially sharp or unnecessary and he himself wasn’t around to deflect it, but both knew that if she spent her time defending everything, there would never be breath between monologues.

It was always easier to simply agree.

“You can never count on a man,” Olivia would say. Maya would offer a “Brian’s never let me down before” or a “You can’t generalize everything, Mom,” but her protests were never met by anything more than a dismissive whistle or abrupt change of subject.

Brian took a half glance behind him and crossed four lanes, drifting toward the exit with the kind of fluid sweep only possible in and around LA on a Sunday. The car was still silent, save for the barely audible backbeat of an old and almost forgotten one hit wonder that only Maya could ever remember the name to, and the sound of Jasmine drinking her bah-bah in the car seat behind them.

The subject of family was best not brought up, like student loans or bachelor parties. Mostly, it was a subject that had already been stripped of all its nutrients. All that was left was a syrup fit for moonshine.  The subject would surface, they would each say slightly more than they should and far less than they meant, and then let awkward silence fill the space between them while counting the long seconds until it was safe to fill the air again.

The baby made everything easier.

“She’s so beautiful,” Brian said, removing his two o’clock from the steering wheel and adjusting the rear view mirror to gain a better look at the pursed lips and focused eyes of the beautiful baby in the back seat suckling on her bottle. His cheeks spread and the smile instantly defrosted his face. Maya absorbed the warmth.

“So do you think mom will be up or down today?” she asked.

“We referring to mood or weight?”

“Is there a difference?” Maya laughed a littler harder than needed and Brian joined her as he pulled a left onto her mother’s tiny cul de sac…

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March

writerHi Everyone. I’ll be back on Monday with the first of four specially planned weeks. In the meantime, here’s an excerpt from March, the third issue of the Fours Seasons online fiction (free) newsletter. If you are already a subscriber, you’ll get the entire thing in a few days. It needs a finishing touch or two.

Thanks and have a great weekend!

… She wasn’t just normally lucky, Libby was the luckiest person she, or anybody who knew her, had ever met. By the time Libby was ten, the word luck had gone forever out of style behind the walls of her family’s small suburban home. Whenever her mother, father, or any of her three older sisters did anything that struck them even slightly fortuitous, they branded themselves as having “just drawn a Libby.” Libby did not comprehend, at least until many years later, the begrudging nature of the compliment.

Though she held nothing concrete to cement her theory, Libby absolutely knew why good fortune was fond to find her. At least she knew what she believed, and for Libby, that was at least three times more than she needed.

Libby had a handful of memories that looped in her head with careless abandon. One such memory sat her and her mother around the breakfast table about a month after Libby had started Kindergarten. She was just old enough to be clear about the difference between right and wrong, yet still young enough for confusion regarding the infinite degrees that lay in the middle.

Libby had asked her mother about the Golden Rule, a term she had heard used by a teacher, just outside the Kindergarten fence, while disciplining one of the older “graders.”

Libby thought the rule sounded beautiful, perhaps a stirling law intended only for royalty. The real answer, she discovered, was even better.

“The Golden Rule,” her mother had said, moving her eyes from the mixing bowl to a deadlock just below Libby’s forehead, “is the most important rule of all.”

“What is it?”

Libby could almost feel the excitement crackling beneath her skin as she waited for her mother’s response. The answer, Libby somehow knew, would be better than a Christmas stocking spilled into an Easter basket.

“The Golden Rule,” her mother smiled, “says that you must do unto others as you would have others do unto you.”

“What does that mean?” Libby’s cheeks bloomed with color. The words rang with familiarity; Libby knew she should understand them without asking.

“It means you must treat other people the way you want to be treated. If you want good things to happen to you, you must make sure you help good things happen to other people.”

Libby’s mother returned to her batter, her daughter still fixed in the corner of her twinkling eyes. Though slightly aware of the current that passed between them, in the way that mothers often are, she could have no idea of the significance of those two simple sentences, or how they would add constant shape to the next two and a half decades of her daughter’s life…

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Four Seasons

Four Seasons

four seasonsThe days of our life each add up to far more than we ever imagine.  How do our actions affect those around us, or  those whom we’ll never meet?

It’s easy to feel lost in a world so busy, immersed in our own lives, staring straight ahead at the world unfurling in front of us.  As we lose one month to the next, each season slowly falling into another, we evolve, each day becoming someone slightly new.

These changes cast new light on our past and push our future in a different direction.

Four Seasons is a writing experiement consisting of a dozen vignettes, one tale for each page of the calendar.  Toward the end of each month, subscribers will recieve a story, unique to the coming days.

These vignettes are in rough form.  Though beautifully composed, each narrative is written just prior to being published.  At the end of the year, the stories will be re-constructed so they are all singing a similar song, and in the same key.  They will then be unified into a single volume and sent to all subscribers.

There will be rewrites along the way, and reader feedback is always welcome.

Four Seasons is an exciting project, not quite like anything I’ve done so far.

Subscribe for free and be a part of it all year long.

Here are some thoughts from those who have started Four Seasons already:

“Gripping, touching, emotionally charged — feels like I’m right there as your descriptive style throws the proper lighting on each moment. The build up of anger … is as perfect as the subtle redemptive wave on the other side of the (cop) scene.  Your writing makes reading fun — from the curiosity you evoke at the beginning to the love and passion of your characters. Suh-weet!  If this is the beginning — sheesh — I’m glad to be along for this ride!”
~ Lori, Space Age Sage

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~ Jamie Grove, How Not to Write

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Enjoy, and see you Monday

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My sister just had me in stitches this morning as she wished me happy birthday and took me on a trip down memory lane.

Four Seasons

“The seasons are what a symphony ought to be:  four perfect movements in harmony with each other.”

~Arthur Rubenstein

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I have a new writing project.  It’s called Four Seasons.

Four Seasons is a collection of twelves short stories, each taking place in a different month.  Each tale’s events are unique to their time, and should each one assemble toward something special.  It’s definitely an experiment, but I’m thrilled with the first one, finished just hours ago.

The project is newsletter only.  You can sign up at the bottom of this page.  If you’ve already signed up, it’s already in your in-box (I hope you guys love it).

Below are a few bites from the story:

  • Maya’s breath hastened into short bursts of labored punctuation, each tiny cry climbing closer toward frantic.
  • Time fell from its normal rhythm, into a syrupy pool of swirling seconds; each trudging forward minus meaning.  Brian pushed one leg through his pant bottoms, then the other.  He pulled the shirt over his head, mopping his forehead on the way down.
  • He had lost only three minutes since the blond nurse handed him the folded scrubs, but in that time, the doctors had already cut Maya wide in an abyss of blood and gaping flesh.
  • The officer ambled toward the minivan, carrying the undisguised gait of a man looking forward to writing a ticked.  “License and registration,” he commanded in a boom which invited no banter.
  • Brian sailed through the third red light like it had point value, clearing the empty intersection somewhere between speed limit and death on impact.  “I have to stop doing that,” he thought.  “There’s three of us now.”

See you all on Monday, and have a terrific weekend.

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