February

January 30, 2009

February

This is an excerpt from the second volume in the twelve part story, “Four Seasons.”   If you would like to subscribe  (for free) to the rest, the form is at the bottom.

Please enjoy.

219963961_c6bbeb7ac3The interior of the park was distant cousin to its perimeter.  The park which blurred by at 35 MPH was pretty.  Seen up close, it was beautiful.  One hundred trees swayed softly in a circle surrounding a placid pond where a dozen ducks danced in a crooked line across the water.  February frost capped the mountains which severed horizon, completing the postcard perfect setting of a Leap Year afternoon.

John sat on a bench, sipped his coffee, and watched a parade of people he had never seen before and would never see again.  An enormous man losing his leash, and the chihuahua attached, brought a quiet smile to his lips, and the angry mother grabbing her toddler with enough force to purple the arm, caused him to wince, but it was the couple he spied on the other side of the pond who brought a full smile to his long face.

They were old and beautiful, weaving their fingers together so carelessly, they must have been doing it nearly all their lives.  They sat with long silences punctuated by an occasional exchange of nearly silent words, often chased by quiet fits of laughter.  John wondered what it must be like to share so much with someone for so long.  He had no true frame of reference; no memory of grandparents.  His own mom and dad split before he finished elementary school and John’s own relationships seemed to have a shelf life of no longer than two years.

It had been a consistent article of faith that one day he would fall in step with the right girl and the perfect life would find him; his own happily ever after, forever around the next corner.  John had celebrated his fortieth birthday with a one night stand, and what had been a given for two decades now felt like a dimming dream circling the drain.  Perhaps it was time to rethink his approach.

John was good looking, beautiful even.  Though he was not vain, or in any way conceited, he could not be told something his entire life and remain clueless to the fact.  Despite knowledge of his handsome face, flawless skin, and brilliant blue eyes, John carried a crippling shyness when it came to meeting new people, worse when it came to the opposite sex.  Women approached him regularly, and whether out of loneliness or optimism, he often accepted their somewhat obvious invitations.  More often than not, these women were sure in their charms and used to having their way.  John tired of them quickly.

A good relationship, he believed, was like anything else – you could not just expect it to be quietly handed over.   Perhaps he needed to start doing some of the asking.

John swallowed the last sip of coffee, dropped the empty cup in the can, and started the walk back to his car.

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  • Writer Dad
    Ulla: Thanks as always. I'm glad you read my words at all, though especially out loud.

    Vered: Happy Anniversary! I'm whistling, you just can't hear me. 20 Years is a long, long time, Vered. Congratulations. My grandparents were married for 74 years and their marriage is a constant inspiration to me.

    Eric: Happy Anniversary to you too my man! Why didn't you tell me sooner? Congratulations, and I've no intention of stopping.

    Mare: True that. One of Daisy's favorite activities in the whole world is people watching. She could do it for days.

    Patricia: Don't worry about it, Patricia. I'll send you February later today, as this is only about ten percent of the story.

    Laurie: Indeed I will, Laurie. Thanks.
  • Laurie
    ...weaving their fingers together so carelessly......Ahhhhhhh so sweet. Keep it up my friend.
  • Month two in the Seasons series is very nice indeed and your word images are spectacular.
    Thank you.
    I am subscribed but with all the internet ups and downs of the past month, I some how lost my copy. Glad you posted it here. I look forward to the next installment.

    Bikingarchitect and I have been married for 32 years- this is a reminder that we need to go for a walk and hold hands even while we are feeling the pressure to keep 1 in college until she is finished, and 12 employees and their families up and running. Cleaning and doing weight lifting class together is just not the same as walking hand in hand.

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  • Hi Sean: Great story for February. When I lived in Washington, DC I would go to the mall all the time (year round) and people-watch. Everyone has a story . . .
  • "... what had been a given for two decades now felt like a dimming dream circling the drain. Perhaps it was time to rethink his approach ..."
    Just one of the oh so human elements that bubbles up from your writing.
  • Thanks, Sean, for sharing this snippet of your newsletter. I'd say it encouraged me to signup, but I already am. :-)

    BTW, as Vered mentioned her upcoming anniversary, I'll mention mine. As of January 29th, Liz and I have been married for 7 years. That's 13 shy of Vered, but still mind blowing for us. We're happy to say that we're happily married.

    Keep the great stories flowing, Sean! Eric

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  • Beautiful.

    "John wondered what it must be like to share so much with someone for so long. "

    Do you know that in February of next year Ido and I will celebrate 20 years of being together (and 16 years of marriage in September of that year)?

    I really hate the thought of growing old, but since I must, I really like the thought of growing old with him.

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  • Very nice story, Sean! And one I enjoyed reading loud online. Thanks!

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