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	<title>Comments on: Four Seasons&#8230;February</title>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/writing/four-seasons-february/comment-page-1/#comment-23302</link>
		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Dec 2009 19:50:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Anybody looking to see what love of writing is, read this post.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Anybody looking to see what love of writing is, read this post.</p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/writing/four-seasons-february/comment-page-1/#comment-39638</link>
		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Dec 2009 19:50:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Anybody looking to see what love of writing is, read this post.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Anybody looking to see what love of writing is, read this post.</p>
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		<title>By: Andreas Souvleris</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/writing/four-seasons-february/comment-page-1/#comment-23136</link>
		<dc:creator>Andreas Souvleris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Dec 2009 12:56:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow. I stumbled upon your post about shots and thought it was pretty good so checked out the rest of your site. Simply awesome man, keep up the good work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow. I stumbled upon your post about shots and thought it was pretty good so checked out the rest of your site. Simply awesome man, keep up the good work.</p>
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		<title>By: Andreas Souvleris</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/writing/four-seasons-february/comment-page-1/#comment-39637</link>
		<dc:creator>Andreas Souvleris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Dec 2009 12:56:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow. I stumbled upon your post about shots and thought it was pretty good so checked out the rest of your site. Simply awesome man, keep up the good work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow. I stumbled upon your post about shots and thought it was pretty good so checked out the rest of your site. Simply awesome man, keep up the good work.</p>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/writing/four-seasons-february/comment-page-1/#comment-23074</link>
		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Dec 2009 16:21:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My pleasure, Ms. Jamie. I&#039;m glad you enjoyed John&#039;s perfect day.
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/GhostWriterDad/~3/ww-_6XMJHvc/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;How to Manage Your Ghostwriter&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My pleasure, Ms. Jamie. I&#8217;m glad you enjoyed John&#8217;s perfect day.<br />
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/GhostWriterDad/~3/ww-_6XMJHvc/" rel="nofollow">How to Manage Your Ghostwriter</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/writing/four-seasons-february/comment-page-1/#comment-39636</link>
		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Dec 2009 16:21:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My pleasure, Ms. Jamie. I&#039;m glad you enjoyed John&#039;s perfect day.
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/GhostWriterDad/~3/ww-_6XMJHvc/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;How to Manage Your Ghostwriter&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My pleasure, Ms. Jamie. I&#8217;m glad you enjoyed John&#8217;s perfect day.<br />
.-= Sean&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/GhostWriterDad/~3/ww-_6XMJHvc/" rel="nofollow">How to Manage Your Ghostwriter</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Jamie Simmerman</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jamie Simmerman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Dec 2009 19:44:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>:D Thanks Sean.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>:D Thanks Sean.</p>
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		<title>By: Jamie Simmerman</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/writing/four-seasons-february/comment-page-1/#comment-39635</link>
		<dc:creator>Jamie Simmerman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Dec 2009 19:44:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>:D Thanks Sean.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>:D Thanks Sean.</p>
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		<title>By: Writer Dad</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/writing/four-seasons-february/comment-page-1/#comment-22848</link>
		<dc:creator>Writer Dad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Dec 2009 16:57:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Terry, 

I agree on the passive voice. I&#039;ve rinsed a lot of the passive from my voice in the last year, but it would do me well to revisit this from the beginning with a magnifying glass. I plan to go over the entire thing at the end of January after taking a break from it and gathering feedback through comments, email and Twitter. 

Thanks! I&#039;m glad you liked it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Terry, </p>
<p>I agree on the passive voice. I&#8217;ve rinsed a lot of the passive from my voice in the last year, but it would do me well to revisit this from the beginning with a magnifying glass. I plan to go over the entire thing at the end of January after taking a break from it and gathering feedback through comments, email and Twitter. </p>
<p>Thanks! I&#8217;m glad you liked it.</p>
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		<title>By: Writer Dad</title>
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		<dc:creator>Writer Dad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Dec 2009 16:57:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Terry, 

I agree on the passive voice. I&#039;ve rinsed a lot of the passive from my voice in the last year, but it would do me well to revisit this from the beginning with a magnifying glass. I plan to go over the entire thing at the end of January after taking a break from it and gathering feedback through comments, email and Twitter. 

Thanks! I&#039;m glad you liked it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Terry, </p>
<p>I agree on the passive voice. I&#8217;ve rinsed a lot of the passive from my voice in the last year, but it would do me well to revisit this from the beginning with a magnifying glass. I plan to go over the entire thing at the end of January after taking a break from it and gathering feedback through comments, email and Twitter. </p>
<p>Thanks! I&#8217;m glad you liked it.</p>
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