• Out-Numbered: Thanks, Man. It's all about the writing. I write so that my children might one day read. At least that's why I write here. There are other sites where I write so that they may eat. : > )

    Tricia: A full tip of the hat goes to Dave for the dialogue. It wouldn't have been what it was without him. Now that he's on board I'm looking forward to June even more.
  • Wonderfully written and the dialogue is real. I'm always intrigued by dialogue done well as it's one area I spend insane amounts of time struggling with. Looking forward to reading your next installment.
  • Dude. The writing on this site is top notch. Never skips a beat...
  • J.D: The characters are totally driving the story, though I now have Dave in the car as well. I'll know their fates in December.

    Trina: This is the first month that starts sending things into a more focused direction. I'm as curious as you though, believe me.
  • Trina
    Each month the journey is open ended, will there be a crossroads, a united destination? Only time will tell I guess. Though I savour each month, this is one year that I look forward to concluding.
  • Beautiful prose and it looks like each character has some real personality.

    As you unfold the story, are you letting the characters take the story where it needs to go, or do you see the story in your mind and their fates are already determined?
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