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		<title>By: RedBook&#8230; An Excerpt Part III — Writer Dad</title>
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		<dc:creator>RedBook&#8230; An Excerpt Part III — Writer Dad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Dec 2008 16:02:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Note: This is the third excerpt in a series. Part one is here, part two here. [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Writer Dad</title>
		<link>http://writerdad.com/writing/redbook-an-excerpt-part-duex/comment-page-1/#comment-3604</link>
		<dc:creator>Writer Dad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 Nov 2008 01:00:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ian:  Oberst is both talented and a complete punk.  I couldn&#039;t agree more.  I&#039;m glad my spell check liked Conner better than Connor, or we might not have been so lucky.  : &gt; )

Vodka Mom:  You are too kind.  Thanks, and you&#039;ll have an opportunity soon.  I promise.

Janice:  You too Janice, are too kind.  Thank you.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ian:  Oberst is both talented and a complete punk.  I couldn&#8217;t agree more.  I&#8217;m glad my spell check liked Conner better than Connor, or we might not have been so lucky.  : > )</p>
<p>Vodka Mom:  You are too kind.  Thanks, and you&#8217;ll have an opportunity soon.  I promise.</p>
<p>Janice:  You too Janice, are too kind.  Thank you.</p>
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		<title>By: Janice Cartier</title>
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		<dc:creator>Janice Cartier</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 23 Nov 2008 04:16:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ll look forward to it. ;-)

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Janice Cartiers last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feeds.feedburner.com/~r/cartier/paintings/~3/460886401/purple-showed-up.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Purple Showed Up&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll look forward to it. ;-)</p>
<p><abbr><em>Janice Cartiers last blog post..<a href="http://feeds.feedburner.com/~r/cartier/paintings/~3/460886401/purple-showed-up.html" rel="nofollow">Purple Showed Up</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: vodkamom</title>
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		<dc:creator>vodkamom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 23 Nov 2008 01:32:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>that was SO great.  I really AM in awe of you.  I can&#039;t wait to read more....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>that was SO great.  I really AM in awe of you.  I can&#8217;t wait to read more&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>By: Ian</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ian</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Nov 2008 18:13:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>WD,

Always tuned in to this channel. As for Conner, it&#039;s probably just me. It reminds me too much of the musician Bright Eyes (Connor Oberst), who is a very good singer/songwriter and puts on a good show; however, when he talks between songs, he comes across as arrogant which was a big put-off to me. Since the spelling is different, I&#039;m sure I&#039;ll survive. :)

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Ians last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://indigospot.com/2008/11/intel-stock-goes-into-the-toilet&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Intel Stock Goes Into the Toilet&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>WD,</p>
<p>Always tuned in to this channel. As for Conner, it&#8217;s probably just me. It reminds me too much of the musician Bright Eyes (Connor Oberst), who is a very good singer/songwriter and puts on a good show; however, when he talks between songs, he comes across as arrogant which was a big put-off to me. Since the spelling is different, I&#8217;m sure I&#8217;ll survive. :)</p>
<p><abbr><em>Ians last blog post..<a href="http://indigospot.com/2008/11/intel-stock-goes-into-the-toilet" rel="nofollow">Intel Stock Goes Into the Toilet</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Writer Dad</title>
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		<dc:creator>Writer Dad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Nov 2008 15:28:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Janice:  I have an idea for RedBook.  I think you&#039;ll like it.  I&#039;ll have it ready for next Friday.  I believe you are right, I think they&#039;ve been found.

Ian:  Conner&#039;s no good, huh?  I don&#039;t know this for certain, but it may have been a subconscious ode to John Conner from the Terminator series.  Weekly serialization?  Stay tuned for next week.

Lori:  Me too, and have you ever met a kid who didn&#039;t like Spaghettios?  Me neither, though I never thought of them as a raw meat chaser until the day before yesterday either.

Kwek Ming Hong:  I&#039;ll be working on them, and we will see them soon.

Friar:  I&#039;m thrilled to hear it, Friar.  I was actually most interested in your comment on this one.  I figured I&#039;d get called out on the wobbly science.  No engineering degree, and actually no degree to speak of.  No joke, I&#039;m actually a high school dropout.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Janice:  I have an idea for RedBook.  I think you&#8217;ll like it.  I&#8217;ll have it ready for next Friday.  I believe you are right, I think they&#8217;ve been found.</p>
<p>Ian:  Conner&#8217;s no good, huh?  I don&#8217;t know this for certain, but it may have been a subconscious ode to John Conner from the Terminator series.  Weekly serialization?  Stay tuned for next week.</p>
<p>Lori:  Me too, and have you ever met a kid who didn&#8217;t like Spaghettios?  Me neither, though I never thought of them as a raw meat chaser until the day before yesterday either.</p>
<p>Kwek Ming Hong:  I&#8217;ll be working on them, and we will see them soon.</p>
<p>Friar:  I&#8217;m thrilled to hear it, Friar.  I was actually most interested in your comment on this one.  I figured I&#8217;d get called out on the wobbly science.  No engineering degree, and actually no degree to speak of.  No joke, I&#8217;m actually a high school dropout.</p>
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		<title>By: Friar</title>
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		<dc:creator>Friar</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Nov 2008 15:05:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Writer Dad

I LIKE this.  :-)

Do you have a science or engineering degree or something?  Because it shows in your writing (I mean this as a compliment!).

 Even though this is a fantasy story, the way you use the technical/scientific terms here is credible, and makes the story more believable.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Writer Dad</p>
<p>I LIKE this.  :-)</p>
<p>Do you have a science or engineering degree or something?  Because it shows in your writing (I mean this as a compliment!).</p>
<p> Even though this is a fantasy story, the way you use the technical/scientific terms here is credible, and makes the story more believable.</p>
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		<title>By: Kate</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kate</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Nov 2008 14:36:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You know, I&#039;m not a big fan of science fiction but you&#039;ve got me hooked. The only sci-fi authors I read were Frank Herbert, Margaret Atwood and George Orwell (I dunno if he can be classified as such but 1984 was sure sci-fi). Great engaging style. You definitely dumped the worthless stuff and stick to only the important details of the story which pulls the reader along. Some fiction stuff on the Net usually make me sleepy. Some writers can&#039;t really bear to kill their darlings. You&#039;re not one of them.

We&#039;ve bumped around the blogosphere but this is my first comment in your site. I definitely liked the part about half a grandma appearing at your door.

The Primotion chip already exists today --as Holosync technology. Whenever I have a negative thought, I plug in a paraliminal cd and whisked it away as if it never existed. Scary, ain&#039;t it? I could be one of your characters. ;)

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Kates last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://ksyu.wordpress.com/2008/11/22/why-real-life-stops-you-from-going-after-your-dreams/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Why Real Life Stops You From Going After Your Dreams&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You know, I&#8217;m not a big fan of science fiction but you&#8217;ve got me hooked. The only sci-fi authors I read were Frank Herbert, Margaret Atwood and George Orwell (I dunno if he can be classified as such but 1984 was sure sci-fi). Great engaging style. You definitely dumped the worthless stuff and stick to only the important details of the story which pulls the reader along. Some fiction stuff on the Net usually make me sleepy. Some writers can&#8217;t really bear to kill their darlings. You&#8217;re not one of them.</p>
<p>We&#8217;ve bumped around the blogosphere but this is my first comment in your site. I definitely liked the part about half a grandma appearing at your door.</p>
<p>The Primotion chip already exists today &#8211;as Holosync technology. Whenever I have a negative thought, I plug in a paraliminal cd and whisked it away as if it never existed. Scary, ain&#8217;t it? I could be one of your characters. ;)</p>
<p><abbr><em>Kates last blog post..<a href="http://ksyu.wordpress.com/2008/11/22/why-real-life-stops-you-from-going-after-your-dreams/" rel="nofollow">Why Real Life Stops You From Going After Your Dreams</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Kwek Ming Hong</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kwek Ming Hong</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Nov 2008 05:53:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It sounds like a wonderful story in the making!

You&#039;ve just caught my interest, and I must say that it is no easy thing for a book to capture my attention as deeply as yours did. The moment I scanned through the first paragraph, I knew I had to continue. And I did. You aroused my curiosity, and now I am dying to read more. I am ready to whirl along with your intricate and highly exciting plot.

I certainly look forward to any future excerpts!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It sounds like a wonderful story in the making!</p>
<p>You&#8217;ve just caught my interest, and I must say that it is no easy thing for a book to capture my attention as deeply as yours did. The moment I scanned through the first paragraph, I knew I had to continue. And I did. You aroused my curiosity, and now I am dying to read more. I am ready to whirl along with your intricate and highly exciting plot.</p>
<p>I certainly look forward to any future excerpts!</p>
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		<title>By: SpaceAgeSage -- Lori</title>
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		<dc:creator>SpaceAgeSage -- Lori</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Nov 2008 20:14:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Spaghettios in a can -- my comfort food as a teen!

Somehow I never put Spaghettios and Sci Fi together before or envisioned it as a raw meat chaser ... you do have a way with the visuals and the instant connect.  Looking forward to more!

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;SpaceAgeSage -- Loris last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://spaceagesage.com/2008/11/19/imagination-and-discovery/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Imagination and discovery&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Spaghettios in a can &#8212; my comfort food as a teen!</p>
<p>Somehow I never put Spaghettios and Sci Fi together before or envisioned it as a raw meat chaser &#8230; you do have a way with the visuals and the instant connect.  Looking forward to more!</p>
<p><abbr><em>SpaceAgeSage &#8212; Loris last blog post..<a href="http://spaceagesage.com/2008/11/19/imagination-and-discovery/" rel="nofollow">Imagination and discovery</a></em></abbr></p>
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